十句作文法

十句作文法是由有關專家總結出來的一種高分作文方法,考生在經過短期訓練之後便可較大幅度地提高成績。為此有必要向考生加以介紹,目的是使一些對作文沒有把握的考生找到一條可行的解決辦法。

基本介紹

  • 中文名:十句作文法
  • 外文名:The ten sentence composition method
  • 作者:張沛
  • 解釋:專家總結出來的高分英語作文法
  • 模式:開頭兩句,正文七句,結尾一句
  • 參考:蔡基剛《英語考試高分作文》
  • 類屬:英語作文
簡介,基本模式,舉例,

簡介

作者:張沛 十句作文法是由有關專家總結出來的一種高分作文方法,考生在經過短期訓練之後便可
較大幅度地提高成績。為此有必要向考生加以介紹,目的是使一些對作文沒有把握的考生找到一條可行的解決辦
法。(參考:蔡基剛《英語考試高分作文》)
需要指出的是所謂十句作文並非一定10句,從很多考生的高分(200詞以下)來分析,句子數量在8句至12句
(依句子長短和結構不同而不同)。如以每個句子平均10—15個單詞計算,便能用8—12個句子完成一篇要求
120—150字的作文。

基本模式

┌─主題句句 1
第一段為:
開頭 └─擴展句句 2
┌─主題句句 1
第一段─┤
正文 ├─擴展句句 2
├─擴展句句 3
├─擴展句句 4
├─擴展句句 5
├─擴展句句 6
├─擴展句句 7
├─擴展句句 8
└─擴展句句 9
第三段 ──結尾句句10
結尾
第一段為開頭,包括兩句。第一句為主題句,必須提出,通過問題點明全文主題;第二句為
擴展句,須進一步說明和支持主題句。或是將關係倒過來,由第一句說明情況,第二句提出
問題。
第二段為正文,共七句。第一句(句3)為主題句,提出本段的主題,它應與第一段的主題
相關和一致。第二句至第七句(句4一句7)為擴展句,說明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要
注意運用好過渡使段落邏輯合理,結構得當。
第三段為結尾,簡化為一句,也是全文的總結句,它將前面內容總結為一結果,表明自己的
論點。
三段之間的連線要靈活運用“啟、承、轉、合”的連線過渡手段。例如:

舉例

Example 1
Television
Television presents a vivid world in front of us. ⑴(主題句)Through TV,we
can learn what is happening half way across the world. ⑵(擴展句)
Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. ⑶
(主題句) For one thing,the TV university provides an opportunity for many young
men who can not go to formal universities. ⑷(擴展句) For another,children can
broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as ''The Animal
World",and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald'' ⑸(擴展句) Besides,women can
learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit
cakes. ⑹(擴展句) Furthermore,we learn many world advanced technologies from TV
programs such as computer and telecommunication. ⑺(擴展句) And also we can learn
singing,dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.
⑻(擴展句) In short,the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more
obvious. ⑼(擴展句)
Having viewed these several aspects,and with many more TV program produced,I
believe that our life will become even more significant. ⑽(總結句) 全文共165個
Example 2
Changes in People's Diet
There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. ⑴(主題句)
For example,grain,the main food of most people in China,is now playing a less
important role,while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk,meat
has increased. ⑵ (擴展句)
The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. ⑶ (主題句)
First,people are much wealthier than before. ⑷ (擴展句) With a higher income,
they can afford to buy good foods which,in the past,were rarely seen on the dinner
tables of ordinary families. ⑸ (擴展句) Another factor is that people have realized
the importance of a balanced diet to their health. ⑹ (擴展句) Lack of certain amount
of meat or milk,for example,will result in poor health. ⑺ (擴展句) Finally,owing
to the economic reform,meat and milk,which were scarce in the past,are produced in
large quantities. ⑻ (擴展句) For all those reasons,what was formerly called ''the
basket of vegetables'' has become that of varied foods. ⑼ (擴展句)
To sum up,insignificant as those changes may seem,they are the signs of the
improved economic condition in China,and we believe that as the effort in the
modernization movement continues,there will be greater changes in people's diet in
the future. ⑽ (總結句) (全文共195個詞)

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