平行結構

平行結構是指在論證某個觀點或論題時,將其分解成具有一定聯繫的幾個方面來加以論述,而這幾個方面都是從屬於中心論題或觀點的,它們之間地位平等,呈平行關係,故稱平行結構。議論文結構中較為常見的是平行結構。

基本介紹

  • 中文名:平行結構
  • 類別:闡述類,分解類,利弊類
  • 用於:論文寫作
  • 類型:論述方式
議論文中的平行結構,分解類,闡述類,利弊類,英語中的平行結構,

議論文中的平行結構

依據平行結構與論點(或論題)的關係,可以將其大致分成如下幾類。

分解類

論證中平行結構的幾個方面是對中心論點的展開與說明,是中心論點的具體化,恰似文章結構中的總分關係。如初語教材中《理想的階梯》一文,文章的中心論點是“奮鬥是理想的階樣”,並列的幾個部分可以說是對“奮鬥”一語的分解與具體化:
1、刻苦勤奮,是理想的階梯;
2、珍惜時間,是理想的階梯;
3、迎難而上,是理想的階梯。
一些抽象的文題,如《知識就是力量》、《時間就是一切》等常用此類結構布局謀篇來進行論證。

闡述類

論證中平行的幾個方面是對中心論點的屬性和思想意義的揭示與闡發,是作者對某一論題思索認識的結果。比如某年華東六省中學生作文大賽中的一篇奪魁乍文一一《這山望著那山高新解》,作者在辯證地引出學習、工作應有這種精神後,便用了一組平行結構來闡述它的合義:
1、這山望著那山高,是一種永不滿足的精神;
2、這山望著那山高,是一種精益求精的精神;
3、這山望著那山高,是一種進取開拓的精神;
4、這山望著那山高,是一種力爭上遊的精神。
此類形式最能顯示出作者思維的深刻程度。闡釋類的議論文,如《談理想》、《說自信》等,很適宜採用此類結構。

利弊類

議論文常要論述某種主張、做法,而要證明應不應這樣做,最好的方法真過於談作用說危害了。比如宋代羅大經的《鶴林玉露》中有一篇精短議論文《勤有三益》,作者為了說明“為人當勤勞”這一觀點,就採用了如下的平行結構:
1、勤勞,可以有所獲免饑寒也;(創財)
2、勤勞,可以有所勞延壽考也;(健體)
3、勤勞,可以有所事遠淫邪也。(修身)
又如,舫年高考優秀作文有一篇作文叫《嚴於律己,寬於待人》,作者在論證時,也用了此種結構:
正確態度:寬於待人,嚴於律己。
1、寬於待人,才會有知人之智;
2、嚴於律己,則會有自知之明。
論述得既簡明而又頗有深度,得了很高分數也就不足為怪了。
論述主張、做法類的議論文常用此形式,如《學生要不要參加家務勞動》、《課外閱讀小儀》。
一般來講,在應試議論文的寫作中,適時恰當地採用平行結構,有如下一些好處:
首先,能使文章思路清晰,條理分明。議論文重在闡明道理,而要說明某個問題,如能分成幾個方面來進行論述,往往可以使議論顯得有條不紊,多而不亂。
其次,從議論的力度和效果來看,採用平行結構往往能使議論氣韻酣暢,有如重浪排闊,給讀者造成強烈印象,從而增強了議論的說服力。
再次,議論時恰當合理地採用平行結構,能顯示出作者在特定的思維範圍內的不同指向的深度開掘,體現出作者思維的深刻程度。
可以說,平行結構是應試作文寫作中快速成文的有效方法之一。

英語中的平行結構

所謂平行結構就指的是內容相似,結構相同,無先後順序,無因果關係的並列句。從總體上來說,平行結構可以分為以下的幾種類型:
一、連詞連線兩個對等的詞和對等的結構
並列連詞and, but, as well as, or, or else, both … and, neither … nor, either … or, not only … but (also), rather than,as…as等以及從屬連詞than可連線兩個對等的詞和對等的結構。
1.所連線的謂語形式必須一致
例1:He went downtown, bought some books and visited his daughter.
例2:Gunpowder was discovered in the twelfth century, but not used in warfare until two hundred years later.
2.所連線的詞或短語形式必須一致
例1:Your semester grade is based not only on how well you do on each test, but also on how you participate in class.
例2:We often go to the countryside as well as to factories.
例3:I would much rather go to the countryside than stay here.
3.連線的非謂語動詞的形式必須一致
例1:Some find swimming more enjoyable than sitting at home reading.
例2:He was engaged in writing a letter rather than reading the newspaper.
4.所連線的句子結構必須一致
例1:She is pleased with what you have given and all that you have told him.
例2:The purpose of the research had a more different meaning for them than it did for us.
二、某些特定的固定結構。例如:
(1)有些詞後要用平行結構。例如:
prefer sth to sth
prefer doing sth to doing sth
prefer to do sth rather than do sth
1) I prefer rice to noodles.
2)I prefer watching TV to listening to music.
3) He preferred to die rather than surrender.
(2)有些結構中要用平行結構。例如:
would / had rather / sooner do something than do something, would / had as soon do something as do something (寧可……也不……)
1) Liu Hulan said she had rather die than give up.
2) I would as soon stay at home as go.
III 部分強調句
要強調句子的某一部分,可以把句子的結構改變一下,通常有兩種表示強調的句式:It is / was … that …結構和What … is / was…結構。
一、It is / was … that … 結構
1.It is / was … that … 結構可以用來強調句子中幾乎任何部分
例1:It was my mother that threw an egg at Mr. Li yesterday.
例2:It was Mr. Li that my mother threw an egg at yesterday.
2.被強調的部分指人時,可用who 或whom
強調主語時,如果指的是人, 可以不用that而用who來代替。強調賓語時,如果指點的是人,可用whom。例如:
1)It was the dean who walked by.
2)It was Mary whom the old lady missed most.
3被強調部分指物時,要用that
例如:It was an egg that my mother threw at Mr. Li yesterday.
4.被強調部分是狀語時,也只能用that,不能用when或where.
例1:It is during his spare time that John has been studying a course in French.
例2:It was in the hall that the mayor held the press conference.
5.不能用It is / was … that 結構強調動詞
強調動詞常用do,過去式用did。例如:
1) They did study very hard yesterday.
2) He does look forward to making the acquaintance of her.
What … is / was … 結構
二、What … is / was … 結構常用來強調主語或賓語,在這種結構中,is/ was後面是強調的部分。例如:
1)What hurts is my left leg.
2)What I like is her style.

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